This is Matthew. I read through the prologue and it mentions other islands. Will the player eventually be able to access these islands? I was also wondering whether or not player age would impact gameplay/story, or if it was purely a novelty.
I also wanted to point out that in the prologue there are some minor spelling mistakes.
1." causes this extra need for army personal" Personal should be changed to personnel.
2. "I have always admired our skill marksmen" Skill should be changed to skilled.
3." If word gets out to the other realms these island might become prey to attacks" Island should be changed to islands.